Draft of the Video Essay: https://youtu.be/HC6-aRkmBM4
Viewers watching this video essay should know that I tried to cut down on the technical jargon as much as possible. Please pay attention to the images or transitions and tell me if anything needs improvement. I know that I need to add some music at the intro and credits scene. Please give me feedback about the flow of the video and if it seems too long, too short, etc.
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ReplyDeleteMy peer review of your video essay can be found here. You video essay was solid for a first draft and I see a lot of hope with some simple editing and editions. Make sure to spice up your title and maybe create extra slides for visual support on your stakeholders.
ReplyDeleteHere's my peer review of your video essay. I liked your essay, so don't let the score really discourage. I feel that fixing the few things I mention in your project will help you create a better project.
ReplyDeleteMy peer review for your video essay can be seen here. The content for your video essay is great and the draft was good, just work on trying to refine your audio/visual elements!
ReplyDeleteHi Joshua! My peer review of your video essay rough draft can be found at the link below if you highlight it, right click, then hit “Open URL.” Good Job!
ReplyDeletehttps://docs.google.com/document/d/10r68Mf49dQXQqNeFGVc6lWtCNOyc9TW0Bb2mursU5c4/edit
Great video!! Here is my review.
ReplyDeletehttps://docs.google.com/document/d/106lkoy9wGPp_RUdB8RKjqmKMh8YdAMRYfnK9I0_ZEbk/edit?usp=sharing