For this Peer Review, I looked at the Content Outline done by Marvin Chaires.
Overall, Marvin did a great job outlining his information and organized it effectively. However, I do have some recommendations for him:
Outlining Suggestion:
The content outline guidelines asked you to provide a piece of interesting information or a "hook" to the intro and a piece in the conclusion to wrap up the piece overall. In your outline, I did not see those two important pieces. Perhaps go back and add them in so that your outline is more complete and provides a better framework for your rough draft.
As well, I did not see specific sources for your information. While the outline is just a rough template to get you started on your rough draft, a few hyperlinks to some of your pieces of evidence would go a long way towards helping you organize your research.
Speaking of research, a quick look at the Research Checklist on page 98 of the Student's Guide to First-Year Writing couldn't hurt.
Good luck with Project 3!
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