For this Peer Review, I looked at the Content Outline done by James Fusaro.
Overall, James did a great job giving us a general view of what his first body section will look like. I will make an outlining suggestion for him.
To begin, the use of evidence was superb. While links might not be present, you have a good idea of where to find information for your project.
You explained that your outline was part of an argumentative essay. This is an excellent piece of information to include as it establishes the rhetorical situation of your piece.
One suggestion, however: the adaption seems a bit short. One paragraph for a body section might not be enough to cover all of the information that you wish to present. In my own college essay, I used about 2-3 paragraphs for each body section.
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